INITIAL IDEAS

INITIAL IDEAS:

OUR FIRST IDEA'S

At first the initial storyline was two spy's coming over to an undercover house in which they were undergoing a mission. This mission included protecting a micro-chip. When coming over to the house the spies caught glimpses of a person in the top window in which they instantly began to think about the micro-chip in which they had not been protecting during the time. They remembered they had turned the lasers that were across the floors on  and was hoping that they were still on as these being turned off meant the micro-chip was accessible. Therefore the young spies wasted no time and ran into the house in which case they heard a sudden bang. This followed by the pair of them franticly running into the house to there distraught the micro-chip had disappeared. This left the two splitting up and running around the house looking for this "mystery person". The way that Abbie had followed to find this person unfortunately led her also to her death as she shot in the chest in which she started to roll down the stairs leaving the ideas of ;

Who killed Abbie (belle)?



what was on the micro chip ?

why was it Abbie (belle)?


FINAL IDEA'S 

After thinking about our ideas we decided it would be better to maybe change some of ideas as there would be too many shots and the storyline would be hard to carry on if most of the action is in the beginning sequence. So in the end we decided that we would keep the ideas of the spies and the micro chip. Except maybe adding a twist to the story would create more suspense and an ideal storyline . Therefore we began the scene with the spies walking towards the house and once reaching the door there was a bang . In which case this followed buy the distraught = that the micro-chip had been stolen and the lasers had been cut off . Both franticly running around the house.. We first follow "Violet" around the staircase, followed by flicking  to Abbie in which she becomes worried and slowing down the further she goes up as she reaches the turret of the house. To her surprise she conronted by a person dressed in black which shock and surprise she freezes in which the "person" pushes her down the stairs braking her neck by the time she reaches the bottom the camera ends the shot on the killer.

Our aim of this film is to keep the audience guessing on who the killer is .this gives suspense. Why did they kill her ? ... What's on the moicrochip? ... Whos is the killer? ..